tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-923688854640620705.post4588460802852706579..comments2023-04-01T09:39:26.438-07:00Comments on Padawan's Journal: Shining Lightjoshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04078324392143091107noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-923688854640620705.post-44229041683999144312012-02-12T17:15:30.535-08:002012-02-12T17:15:30.535-08:00"..their now getting what they diserve."..."..their now getting what they diserve."<br /><br />It's supposed to be "..they're now getting what they deserve."<br /><br />Despite the minor spelling and grammar error, this story is brilliant and should be continued in the near future. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-923688854640620705.post-7436674726593384672011-11-26T14:48:58.107-08:002011-11-26T14:48:58.107-08:00Fantastic!! Great fanfic, I loved the emotion and ...Fantastic!! Great fanfic, I loved the emotion and struggles inside Ahsoka. If only the Clone Wars team would write stuff this great.Savannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00605884297159790774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-923688854640620705.post-72383402815466891042011-03-28T20:36:44.262-07:002011-03-28T20:36:44.262-07:00INCREDIBLE!! I'm with Chris, this feels like ...INCREDIBLE!! I'm with Chris, this feels like it's an excerpt from a Clone wars novel. Your best work yet, keep it up!Benjaminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142718286700563234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-923688854640620705.post-36573220777525091762011-03-28T19:47:54.281-07:002011-03-28T19:47:54.281-07:00YES!!!!!!
1. That was the best fanfic of yours I h...YES!!!!!!<br />1. That was the best fanfic of yours I have ever read.<br />2. The concept and the way you wrote it was very emotionally connected.<br />3. The way you wrote the characters was very believable.<br />4. You should seriously consider the career of a writer.<br />5. If you fix a few typos this will look professional.<br />6. WOW.Chris Seekellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13720994440724306509noreply@blogger.com